nevershoutnever! asked:
There is a talking rabbit named Peter and he and his dad go on a walk to find some carrots. He stops to smell the flower and his father keeps going. Then he loses his father.And…Yeah he finds a carrot.! Not just any carrot… a talking one named Diablo!!! Then the carrot knows all the paths in al the woods on Earth And helps Peter find his way home. THE END!!!
That was just a summary of it but do you like it?
There is a talking rabbit named Peter and he and his dad go on a walk to find some carrots. He stops to smell the flower and his father keeps going. Then he loses his father.And…Yeah he finds a carrot.! Not just any carrot… a talking one named Diablo!!! Then the carrot knows all the paths in al the woods on Earth And helps Peter find his way home. THE END!!!
That was just a summary of it but do you like it?
Hey kikio… I changed my name!! Sorry if I confused you!
I will post when I am done with it!!!
8^P
Sorry kikio! I needed a change!! Um It is a book I am writing!
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9 responses so far ↓
1 Carolyn R // Jun 3, 2010 at 11:46 am
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alright sure
2 marleysgirl13 // Jun 3, 2010 at 8:01 pm
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i would read it, but im not a kidd…
3 Bernie // Jun 6, 2010 at 9:51 pm
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yes it sounds OK I think I read it to my children when they were small it is a Beatrix potter story, I think.
4 Ms* Shae* // Jun 8, 2010 at 2:48 am
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yea it’s OK for a summary but it’ll be even better with some kind of moral to it. Like the move “Horton Hears a Who.” He found a spec with tiny people on it and they talked to hI’m about getting to safety and it taught the world that just because you can’t see it, it doesn’t mean it’s not there! It’s a great children’s movie and im 18 and i love it. So add a moral to it. It’ll be great. (:
5 deflina16 // Jun 9, 2010 at 3:58 pm
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yeah…
6 kikio // Jun 12, 2010 at 11:14 am
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Hey Lexie, is this a book you’ve written or a is it a book you’ve read once? It sounds cute either way. You got me all confused. You changed your name and avatar.
Silly rabbit…trix are for kids!
7 radhika // Jun 15, 2010 at 2:53 am
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yes it’s a nice and a suitable story for kids. keep up the good work girl.
8 journeygirl // Jun 15, 2010 at 11:34 am
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ummm sure. its cute and imaginative and very uh, creative!!! write it
9 I love Nick Jonas & Miley Cyrus // Jun 16, 2010 at 9:27 pm
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great! i luv that story! u should publish books!
btw who is kikio!? u always talk about him/her! is kikio a user on yahoo! answers?
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